Details in the paragraphs are clear and specific, and there are enough details to create vivid images for a thorough comparison or contrast.
Many details are not in a logical or expected order. Delivery is poor with a lot of breakages in speech.
Examples are not there, and neither is supporting information to reinforce the points presented. Writer makes more than 4 errors in grammar or spelling that distracts the reader from the content. The writer has a clear understanding of what the audience expect to gain from reading his essay.
The author of the essay pays no mind to the readers with comparison and contrasts not clear or helpful at all to the audience.
Paragraphs have topic sentences, but the sentence structure does not ensure smooth reading with little to no transitions. The presentation and support of his or her points, however, do not comprehensively deal with the argument.
Paragraphs do not have topic sentences nor any sentence structure. The transitions between ideas are unclear or nonexistent. While transitions are present they do not add to the overall effectiveness of the essay.
There is consistent tone and word choice is appropriate with fairly good use of transitions to guide the reader. It follows a consistent order when discussing the comparison.
The conclusion or introduction is absent.